Saturday, April 11, 2015

Two Faces Comments

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I view my weaknesses
With a sense of joy
For I can improve upon them
To create in me a better alloy.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 April 2015

view my strength With a sense of fear Truly, one should not be over confident of one's strength.

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Valsa George 13 April 2015

This is the right balancing act of the mind that prevents one from growing over confident and also creating in him the desire for making improvements! It is never a weakness! A pithy write!

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Hazel Durham 12 April 2015

So wise to be able to rejoice in our weaknesses is a sign of moving forward with the challenge to improve, where our strengths come easily to us but we have to live up to expectations! Great write!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 April 2015

To be able to view one's weaknesses with joy is a great achievement. What you have described in the poem, the two conflicting ways, is a very positive sign of a healthy mind. It is not your weaknesses getting an upper hand. Well written short poem that is very purposeful.

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