Friday, March 2, 2018
Two Eye Whirligig Comments
Rating: ★3.5
The neighbor's lawn's whirligig's
caught the lamplight's reflection
and I thought I saw for a half minute past hallucination
the gleam of two eyes
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Kumarmani Mahakul
02 March 2018
The lamplight's reflection is caught in amazing place with thought of expression. Brilliant view is shared with this poem...10
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7/23/2025 4:25:50 PM # 1.0.0
May i suggest that you edit this a bit to make whirligigs plural and not possessive? You are a good poet, a fine thinker, and a needed contributor to PoemHunter, so be sure your work is presented in its best light...with no silly errors!