Two Dogs Bark Comments

The branches Of a tree Outside my Window, zig -Zag, criss, Cross, - - - - -> excellent image

Great choice of title- -draws readers because you say TWO dogs bark instead of just the dogs bark or some dogs bark.

Alex, I like philosophical poems and I think you have a good one here. In my opinion you manage to write about the nature of our knowledge of good and evil and avoid using cliches or writing a poem that turns into prose...neither of which is easy to accomplish. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poems. Ron