Two Different Worlds Comments

wow.... beautiful beginning with an unexpected end...

Thank you poet. Its a lovely creation. Everyone has two worlds whether he perceives or not. I would love to have your comments on my poems.Will you be kind to visit my page?

Well written Mam. I quote A last resort is a wonderful line which is loud enough to describe the anguish. Lovely write..

The solemn atmosphere at the t b hospital and stak reality of poor's plight is vividly captured. I think you should have closed the poem at 'When there is no place left to go.' especially because the preceding line alreadyrefers tothe hospital as last resort.