Monday, February 3, 2014

Two Different Earrings.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

No one had seen me, when I greeted them,
No one had observed me, when I served them,
No one had gazed at me, when I passed by them,
No one had have heard my heart’s beat, when I was nearer to them.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Lyn Paul 05 February 2014

Lovely words, made me smile as I am one of those people that would tell you about the odd earrings or even if your lipstick was on your teeth. Also I understand Tirupathi's comment. Thank you and congratulations on poem of the day.... I had already read these wonderful words.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 February 2014

Your problem only you know and you are worried. Sometimes it is not good to tell others if the problem is harmless. Beautifully conveyed in the poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 February 2014

subtle yet powerfully satirical!

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