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Oh, it's so sweet! Humor, love and passion makes this poem so special! You have a way of looking at simple things and expressing it simply, mingled with a pinch of humor. Just two days absence brought out this beautiful poem? Well done!

I really miss someone too.. You expressed great emotion of longing for your beloved. A good poem indeed.

hey...you expressed the pain of missing a loved one in a totally different way... which makes a smile at the lip and a tear in the eye...nice

the sense portrayed is relevant is funny how the simplest things bring back memories of those we miss. nice poem loved it

poem is already part of your person...really it is the words of you whole life....

pleasing and very interesting to read..and touching... this piece has some kind of a feeling I can't explain.....a caress in my heart?

That is so brillant...smiles...very nice...reminds of my dad...miss him...people see things in certain ways I suppose...but for me its my dad...bravo..brillant..clap..clap

Nice simile poem - yearning for someone - eloquently written.

awww..... what a wonderful love poem... showing the person that you miss them so much.... only a true love couple can say that and make it speak more than what is said ur Friend Bella

Brilliant expression of missing a loved one. Well done Naida!

Oh.........this is so sweet and touching, a funny too...all emotions exist in your latest write. It's great to feel that..There's no wonder you are very good handed writter..I still smile for all jokes there, the slippers n shirts...nice and i like it so much :) _Unwritten Soul

Sounds like a delightful event to me Jim Troy

...well exprerssed goodwrite.