Two Cities Comments

I saw what your heart held inside The breath and length and everywhere It was engraved- “Preeti” I can see your heart thro' these lines, Preeti-It is so pure and nice.

OMG! ...... Your city of streaming emotions and his city mysteriously apealing.... some imagery this is! ! ! ! Preeti, you are just polishing your skills with every poem.... the more experience you are getting... and the better you get! You absorb so much of lessons of life from all your experiences that it sometimes does amaze the one who reads your work. Your descriptions of the imagery city and your style of narration; your thoughts and your language skills... they all blend so well here.10 was less, wanted to give more, but..........

Preeti, i don't think we're in Kansas anymore...IT'S LIKE YOU PAINTED A BACKDROP OF 'OZ'....Splendid Imagework....crisp structure...Another Fine Pen ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank/FJR

Glad to see your city blooming with flowers and with a heady fragrance: -)