Sunday, October 20, 2013

Two Brothers, One Roof Comments

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That I, so well, tonight might sleep
Two brothers, one roof, their dreams to keep
Wrapped warm together, both heartbeats pound
While mine's, at rest...they're safely sound.
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Susan Lacovara
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Kanav Justa 26 June 2014

.. an amazing poem, , , ,

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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

Possibly the most valuable possession we own is our love of family... it's so nice to spread around.. and most wonderful to hear about.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 October 2013

beautiful write liked it.

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Danny Draper 22 October 2013

To look upon the love between others for which the poet is a part, with joy and peace and happiness for them, is refreshingly greater than its summed parts. A fine write in form and sentiment.

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Unwritten Soul 21 October 2013

Hopeful in this write, a sibling always a sibling to other no matter how hard times they shared sometimes, even we sibling far in distance but same roof is the sky for us and earth is our home...just we live in far room...a beautiful poem Susan_Soul

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2013

This is a beautiful poem. Are they twins? Hope, their wives too will have similar compatible feelings.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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