Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, April 23, 2009

Two Bright Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.9

Bare eyes shine in night,
look so powerful and bright
Keep staring but not made known,
Seem they are made for my own
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

You close the eyes, life come to an end, glitter and shine, smile peters out,

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Shilpa Maheswari 07 October 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known,

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Kamli Kamal 07 October 2009

and face not covered, So eyes when shut, face may reveal,

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Suresh Vakil 02 October 2009

why close eyes alone? and face not covered, So eyes when shut, face may reveal,

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Edwina K 29 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright...........10

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Sadia Hussain 28 August 2009

Keep staring but not made known, Seem they are made for my own.....10

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Ramdulari Sinha 28 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright

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Sita Kesri 28 August 2009

Say not words but also not hide, just smile broad with eyes wide, .......10

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Beauty Philosophy 28 August 2009

Real beauty lies in the eyes 'cause they are the mirror of the soul. If an ugly soul is trapped in a beautiful body, the person will be rejected through time, but if a beautiful soul is trapped in an ugly body, the person will be loved through time... A good write!

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eyes are the mirror of soul! ! ! great poem! Eyes may shine, face may reveal, wounds may heal, love may look real, --> wonderful verses

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Rupa Shah 19 August 2009

eyes show ther real way for us....10

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Jayant Manik 15 August 2009

bright eyes are very powerful....10

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Ketan Rajgor 01 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright eyes are bright and shine..10

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Ratna Patel 01 August 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, revceal so many things....10

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Pittle Shaileja 29 July 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright eyes always look beautiful..10

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Trevor William 27 July 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, Seem they are made for my own eyes are alwys bright and sparkling...10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 27 July 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, Seem they are made for my own two eyes speak so many thing without using words...10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 26 July 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, speak so many things...10

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Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, Seem they are made for my own .. eyes speak so many thing which language can't do..10

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Sejal Kapadia 23 July 2009

Bare eyes shine in night, look so powerful and bright Keep staring but not made known, Seem they are made for my own ...speak so many things....10

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