Monday, March 19, 2007

Two Boys Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sometimes wonder what I've done to deserve you
What special act I must have committed
That God allowed me to have your love
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Michelle Tiddy
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Beautiful work here, Michelle...Passion & Gratitude are strong poetic virtues & you have employed & delivered both very well....Well stuctured stanzaec...mellifluously smooth & enabling a pleasured read...Solid craftsmanship. ~ F.J.R. ~

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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