Tuesday, August 5, 2014

Two Birds, One Stone (Bothering Birds) Comments

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I saw them flying, they were a pair.
I picture them dying they were in fear.
That was the perception I had in my mind.
I had it all figured out!
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Bri Edwards 12 February 2022

'bait', not 'bate' , 'inhalations', not 'inhales' , and a few verbs were used with incorrect 'tenses', BUT i liked the poem. bri ;)

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