Saturday, November 3, 2018

Two Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

two birds left me clues
about life and laughter

a tiny wriggling worm
...
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Anindita Bose
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Beautiful poem. "They call in zest…..their shadows mix with the rays of sun". Loved the images you have used to accentuate the poetry

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Ruth Pal Chaudhuri 19 February 2020

this is beautiful. the part about the worm between them is so apt

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2018

an empty nest awaits the return of beating hearts in songs of raindrops...beautiful realization my dear poetess. create from your poetic heart new gems.. wish u that today. tony

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