Friday, September 23, 2016

Two Birds Comments

Rating: 4.2

Two birds
are fluttering through my mind:
a black raven and a white dove.
The black was ruling
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2016

The black was ruling and I killed you. Now he has lost me, the dove want to rule - but I have nobody to love, only myself! An amazing poem about the ambiguity that rules over human mind and its affairs. Thanks for the sharing of this nice poem.10++ for it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2016

Very amazingly drafted about two birds....

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