Two Birds Comments

Two birds are sitting, On the tree of life. One is below and Another is up, The Earth and the Heaven, One is life,

The birds bellow? I love birds and watch them all the time from my kitchen window on the feeders in my backyard. I have never heard a bird bellow before. I think the word you want is BELOW. I enjoyed reading the poem, anyway. Thanks for posting.

I must quote: - " One is restless, another is restful, One being dead, another is born, ... The dream and a dreamless state The world and the existence, Two birds are One and the same" Your poem is too Profound..thanks

One is below and Another is up, The Earth and the Heaven, One is life, Another is life beyond life, the similie of two birds are well known from the spiritual literature of India. you have exposed it here. thank u. tony

Wonderful use of the image of two birds. Nice poem.

everything of here, there and everywhere is as like as this TWO BIRDS //// lovely poem, enjoyed

Beautiful poem....Two birds are sitting on the branches of life, One is restless, another is restful, One being dead, another is born,

good poem.........👍👍👍👍👍

nicey birdy poetry one below the other above birds together always club well done dear poetry cub