Sunday, December 4, 2005
Two Bar Stools Comments
Rating: ★3.8
Two bar stools
sit at my bar
in my apartment
where the utilities aren’t in
...
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Jon Edward Walker
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9/6/2025 4:11:46 AM # 1.0.0
nice details in this one but the first few lines were a bit choppy. You're portraying the picture but the scene needs to be more developed. I felt like I was getting flashes and my eyes were darting around the scene trying to put the whole thing together...if that makes any sense!