Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Two Autumn Leaves Comments

Rating: 4.9

Though we both lay here together
we're a hundred worlds apart
different memories; different demons
different Spirits; different Hearts
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Ray Quesada
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Shaun Cronick 14 December 2020

This is my favourite from what I've read already, a great simile poem that delivers. And delivers more than well. Thanks for sharing and simply enjoy life. Take care.

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Titi Dale 31 March 2013

Nice :) leaves have many colours and variations, these are just two of them! Great work :)

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Samuel Augustus 12 January 2013

one of your best for sure. - - i believe you will be quite popular in years to come.

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Kelly Seale 05 November 2012

Stirring... This is a beautiful piece Ray, and I agree, one of the best I've read in a while, which draws me to want to read more from you. Great Ink! :) -Kelly.

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Zaynab Elzain 09 October 2012

Yes..just two autumn leaves, the wind blow us. We are next to each other but we are not together~ touchy..

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