Saturday, April 11, 2015

Two Amazing Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.8

Those amazing wide eyes of yours
So serene and so nice
Like two glittering stars
Amongst millions in the sky.
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Amitava Sur
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 April 2015

Truly Spouse is a life mate and a soul mate.Loved reading it.

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Amitava Sur 24 April 2015

Thanks a lot for appreciating my penning.

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Hazel Durham 12 April 2015

Amazing imagery with such passion and so beautifully expressed!

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Amitava Sur 24 April 2015

Thank you Hazel to realize and appreciating the write.

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Daniel Brick 11 April 2015

SYNECDOCHE - that's the technical poetic term for an image in which a part stands for the whole. I love that word, and the concept behind it. For example, I could say, Those two brothers are so opposite: Rufus is all heart, helping everyone he meets but Lionel is just a billfold who wants all your money! Or to be poetic, I could do as you do, cite a lovely woman's eyes which keep us enthralled and promise the most wonderful happiness to the one she favors with her gaze. I am a believer in the woman you celebrate; she must have a lovely heart to match those lovely eyes. That makes her beautiful both inside and outside.

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Amitava Sur 24 April 2015

Thank you Daniel for appreciating this write.

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Soumita Sarkar 11 April 2015

liked this verse on a pair of eyes.....so true to your heart and beloved.......keep writing.

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Amitava Sur 24 April 2015

Thank you Soumita for realizing the truth behind and appreciating the poem.

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