Wednesday, December 21, 2016

Twists Of Love Comments

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Beautiful as love seems
Beautiful as we dream of it
Beautiful as we imagine of it
It does not come easy
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LINET SABASTIAN
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 February 2017

Sure, pure! Of the harvest. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Kanana 08 February 2017

Like the parable of the seed-sowing so is love. The best love ever, is loving self.Good piece Linet.

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Linet Sabastian 11 February 2017

Thanks Rose

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Linet Sabastian 05 February 2017

Thank you for your kind comment Saadat. Stay blessed

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Saadat Tahir 05 February 2017

interesting use of the word twists... indeed... probably....thats precisely why it can end up in intractable knots... a nice portrayal of the natural history of this engulfing and predominate preoccupation.....love! ! ! ... liked

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Richard Limuli 01 February 2017

wow, nice poetry Madam, keep the fire burning..

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Linet Sabastian 01 February 2017

Thanks Richard

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Siddartha Montik 11 January 2017

How so wonderful, poet., you could compare Lobe. with the. very. nature. as seed and. how it Germinates. with such. care and support of 5 elements. I am so amused reading this! !

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Siddartha Montik 11 January 2017

beautiful. lines! And truth so perfect. We. are. living. in elements. they. have more control than we. As Sir, Rabindranath Tagore, wrote. thefaith waiting in the heart of a seed, promises, a miracle of off life, bit cannot prove it until remains just as a Seed.

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