Sunday, March 24, 2019

Twists Of Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cast your eyes through distractions in darkness,
The darkness that dwells deep within twists of light,
Colours don't blend here they barely have breath
And I'm all alone here in the shadows of night.
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Sarah Persson
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2019

This is a beautiful poem on lost love having touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.

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Sarah Persson 24 March 2019

Thank you Kumarmani for your comments. I am always most thankful

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Sarah Persson 24 March 2019

Thank you poetry lover, your kind words mean alot

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

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