Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Twisted Sunset Comments

Rating: 4.7

Flamboyant eyes search divinity
While wasted morning kills the cup of tea
Revolving chair feels eternity
Red ribbon pause the play button of fantasy
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Abhinav Baruah
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Ankita Sharma 12 March 2010

whoo.. good....nice whirling pattern

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Raju Baruah 07 March 2010

This is life man...the tragedy of this artificial world...you and me...must go through this..nice piece of work.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 04 March 2010

There seems to be a renewed awareness that connects to nature. An unaffected appearance of what occurs naturally and God given. After an acknowledged basicness of life is realized...all becomes 'One' in 'spirit'. In a shared 'togetherness' one experiences alone.

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Dr.ram Mehta 03 March 2010

Isolation exists in isolation. Once it is shared, it evaporates

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 March 2010

Abstract with blend of divinity…itself is divinity Nice stroke of poetic preponderance 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK.

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Chitra - 03 March 2010

a poetic message with a twist...metaphorically descrbing life's twists and turns!

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Joseph Poewhit 03 March 2010

Brings in life's contemplations

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