Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Twisted Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I slowly sink to the depths of life lately my mind
Has tend to wonder in the background it seems
That's all I do who can I look up to while seeking
Truth bombs blowing up like nukes I'm breathing
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2016

To the depths! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Roseann Shawiak 29 September 2016

A very intense and volatile poem about the effects of love and how they can turn us inside out with emotional anger and hatred. You have described this relationship exactly the way it unfolds time and again. Excellent write, Laquory! It does lead to a mistrust of being loved or loving another, a hard thing to grasp, when all one wants is to be loved in return without all the blame and admonishment. Thank you for sharing.10++++ RoseAnn

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Gajanan Mishra 27 September 2016

never ending love, here see.

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