Friday, August 7, 2009

Twisted Limbs Comments

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I see a man with twisted limbs
Who has wheels to take him home
A kindly man, a friendly man,
Who need never ride alone.
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Irene C S ClarkHogg
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Subroto Chatterjee 13 August 2009

You mentioned to me about a great big stick.....thats what we need - to use it on the twisted minds... Cheers. Subroto

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Surya . 12 August 2009

wonderful poem. beautiful ending. 'So, which man is the cripple? One with twisted limbs that are no use, Or the one who has a twisted mind, And feels the need to shout abuse? ' voted10 surya

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 August 2009

Oh this is a very creative piece of work ma'am.. I do agree.. you give a great message, and you expressed yourself in the most effective way. good thoughts expressed in most argumentative and creative manner loves shan

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James B. Earley 12 August 2009

Another view of man's inhumanity to man! Yet we call ourselves...civilized.

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