Sunday, October 16, 2011

Twisted Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

I haven't lost the will to change,
only the will to settle.
You were always so much
less
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Elizabeth Grace
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Romeo Della Valle 16 October 2011

A very powerful and beautifully penned write that clearly shows you have a very sensitive heart! I love this write with the exception of one single word in line #23 which I consider inappropriate and should be changed to anything else like ' all the things you put me through' otherwise, it is amazing! 10+++ God Bless You! Keep inspiring the World with more writes of such magnitude! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

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