Monday, October 24, 2011

Twisted Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

wishing to gain control of all this
lost in this twisted dream
my aching heart needs to finally have relief
my trapped mind finally needs freedom
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Deep Mukherjee 17 January 2012

There is a presence of something irresistible in your poem; it has a general inclination of attracting people towards it! ! ! !

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Kara Towe 11 January 2012

Good write, really felt it! Hope you feel better, my heart goes out to you. Keep penning. :)

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Tears welled in my eyes as I read your poem... To be able to write emotion is a gift few are blessed with... You clearly have this gift... Powerful poem, well written...

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Dave Walker 25 October 2011

A really powerful poem. Great write.

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