Sunday, July 30, 2006

Twins Comments

Rating: 5.0

One talks, the other listens;
One runs, the other dreams;
Each perfect body glistens
One quarter from my genes.
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Linda Hepner
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John Tiong Chunghoo 07 May 2019

lovely....there is a twin twin rhythm about the poem very nice.

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Tailor Bell 30 July 2006

Sensual, wild. -T. Bell

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Gina Onyemaechi 30 July 2006

I've enjoyed the rhythm and the rhyme here, Lind, but your diction is normally stronger than it is here. A more than competent piece, though, easily. Love, Gina.

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Anna Russell 30 July 2006

Beautiful Linda, just beautiful. Hugs Anna xxx

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