Friday, December 5, 2014

Twins Of My Light Comments

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Don't you see?
The moon, the sun
That dwelled in me
You don't see
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 30 December 2014

In life In - as twined Twins of my light Beautifully composed poem with fire of sun and light of moon.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Md Asadullah 07 December 2014

Very imaginative, you've compared sun and moon to mind and heart, thanks for sharing this metaphorical poem :)

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