Saturday, May 13, 2006

Twins Comments

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You're both growing inside me,
Not knowing what's to come,
I pray you're both healthy and strong like your father,
Unlike me, for I am weak and ill.
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Preeti - is here! 19 May 2006

Glad i read this poem 'twins'.It is a very sentimenatl poem..gr8 flow of emotions..and very to the point. Hope things work out fine for u guys. Preets

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KRISTEN...JUST GOT FINISHED READING '' TWINS ''...A MAGNIFICENT PIECE OF WORK.KRISTEN, WHEN THERE IS CRISIS, YOU WOULD BE AGAZED TO KNOW HOW THE MIND, ATTITUDE AND PASSION BECOME A FAR MORE IMPERVIOUS FORCE FOR THE CRISIS TO HANDLE, THAN THE CRISIS BE TO THE ONE WHO IS BATTLING ONE...TIS VERY TRUE...THANK YOU FOR YOUR READ & COMMENTS ON (X86) ...AND AFTER READING YOUR WORK HERE, I SEE YOU & I ARE ON THE SAME PAGE...SAD THOUGH THAT THERES A FLIP SIDE TO EVERY PAGE, ISN'T IT? TIME TO HAVE SOME FUN...YOU SAID THAT YOU ENJOYED MY BASEBALL BARRY (PART I) , welllll...THERES 6 MORE PARTS, EACH GOOFIER THEN THE PRIOR ONE...PLUS 2 BARRY BASEBALL HAIKU'S...LET ME KNOW JUST HOW FOOLISH I CAN BE ON PAPER, ON THE NET, EXPOSED 24/7/365 TO BILLIONS......SOUNDS LIKE A PROMO FOR McDONALDS...''MILLIONS SEVED...''.............FRANK SIDE TO EVERY PAGE

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Tracey Collins 15 May 2006

Very sad poem, I hope everything works out for you, and that you make it through to help your husband raise those two little one. Praying for you.

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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