Twinkling Teens Comments

WOW'...................... That is AKhtar Vai - Hitting the bull's eye Friends - that is truly The life's ball game. No doubt on it It's a ten on ten Loved it with only 10.

This is quite interesting with the Akhtar stamp! ! Tangerine is sour and bitter when it is green! With the onset of puberty, many boys and girls are equally sour and bitter. As they cross the teens, they become mellowed and sweet! Truth veiled in raillery....... Enjoyed much! A 10

Every line is twinkling like stars...............10

Bittersweet stages of teens so beautifully depicted.......wonderful poetry.......10/10

A great social message and this poem is very nice.