Wednesday, July 15, 2020

Twinkling Sips Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see and ignore a woman's running reels,
But I can't ignore the perfume that my blind heart feels,
Yes I can imagine the colors of a colorless perfume,
It's my blind heart that knits an unseen costume,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 July 2020

A very lovely poem that brilliantly captures a woman's wonderful attributes and man's preferences and desires. " I see and ignore the color of a woman's skin." Wonderful message from a great Poet. Beautifully written. Liked the fascinating title.

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Aarzoo Mehek 15 July 2020

That's such a sweet poem. An adorable ode to a man's desire. Delicately woven words. Awesome poem.10+++

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