Friday, July 17, 2020

Twinkle Twinkle Little Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are.
Then you plummet earthbound,
A spy satellite hits the ground.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 July 2020

An incisive write. It is sad to note that technology has been used as a vehicle to invade our most treasured privacy. A brilliant poem so well crafted and executed.

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Dominic Windram 18 July 2020

Excellent observational poem Shaun...a thought - provoking twist on a quaint song. It's a twinkling 10 from me!

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Shaun Cronick 17 July 2020

This has been rewritten but it will take time for the amended version to register.

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