Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star Comments

A beautiful sonorous piece of poetry nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

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good poem

Thank you for being a voice for those whom are by fear afraid to talk, when I was 8 and younger my father would be in a bar drunk and playing pool while me and my brother would sit for hours outside the bar in the car, he would bring a coke out for us and many times when we had to use the bathroom, we would pee in the bottles and pour it out the window.....this was many years ago, no child should go through things such as these, again, thank you for posting your poetry for the children.

This poem is amazing yet sad

i really like this it made kind of sad

This is a really nice poem. I like it.

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.