Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Twinkle Twinkle Little Scar Comments

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Twinkle twinkle little scar
How I wonder why you are
Up on my wrist but not so high
Leaving everyone wondering why
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Matthew Harrison 18 August 2009

Love it. I tripped up a little in the third stanza. Maybe 'streaked my face'.... Wonderful, as usual.

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Alex Lewis 07 July 2009

The repetition works well here. It sound like you are writing from experience. I hope you're not.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
Payyton Egerstaffer
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Fort Polk, Louisiana
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