Twinkee Girl Comments

nice write....and i straight away see a disturbing undertone... the metaphor isn't too deep not to grasp the painful under currents.... good on poetic parameters and excellent context....so common an issue...its almost everyday liked reading it tc

good poem I like it.Go on. I invite you to read my poem and comment.

Gloriously different and i really love it... im guessing twinkee is some kind of sweet but that there is a double edge to this piece, top notch piece which made me smile but worried of the underlining clues...tyvm...karen