Twin Triplets. No.8. Pilgrim, Stars Comments

Beautifully crafted and well executed twin triplets. A one of a kind description of stars and a pligrim. Liked how the great Poetess brilliantly depicted the stars. Our wonders of the night are so magnificently painted on the canvas of this poem.

DEar valsa, i am really a tramp going after love in an eternal quest. i think we all are. clelestial wayfarers and dancing damsels. wonderful imagination and portrayal.. thank u. i found myself in your poem. tony

To merge with love beyond all shades and sheen soul seeks eternal love and eternal journey. Star dances with damsels of light. Amazing imagery of true perception is very brilliantly explained in this poem...10

The genus Sayornis is a small group of medium-sized insect-eating birds, known as phoebes or .......Phoebe is one of Saturn's most intriguing moons or.....Phoebe (Phoibe) . Phoebe was a Titan goddess of prophetic radiance, often associated with Selene (goddess of the moon) . I VOTE FOR #3, and i vote for Phoebe's, not Phoebes'. ha ha ha. ;) [to be continued]....

A pilgrimage after being ecstatic in love, a search of the ancient eternal truth and a beautiful pen of Valsa George.

The eternal quest after love! Nice work.

Perhaps people have called me tramp and phantom, but never pilgrim nor damsel. Bri :) I can send comments but not messages on tablet; computer still not running. Be good! !

great work.reminds me the film by Luis Bunuel (milky way) .the ending is really marvelous. ~nb

A pilgrim in eternal quest after love finally merging with eternal Love is a wonderful thought! In stars considering them as dancing damsels and celestial wayfarers and finally fading at Phoebes 'sight is lovely! Both the triplets are excellent! !

The eternal quest of the pilgrim is quite interestingly correct perhaps. The stars as the wayfarers when we travel in the infinite pavements of the universe is a superb idea! The sight of Phoebe is just the break for a show going on otherwise. These are fine twin triplets though not identical.

A great poem, fantastic work.