Twin Triplets (No.2) Doldrums, Lost Love Comments

Once I saw rainbows in the sky Once I caught the melody in the wind Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears. ... once it was but it is not now....this is the lost love. Beautifully put. Five stars.

Being in the state of doldrum could be so relaxing only if we are not hit by the downward state described in the second triplet. A marvelous composition.

A beautiful twin triplets dear madam! I find great poetic beauty in your your poetry! Loved reading this fabulous short work....10

In doldrums mind feels emptiness of music. Rainbow of love disappears when there is lamentations in life. Beautifully inscribed. Thanks for sharing.

When our love is with us every thing appears beautiful and when our love is not with us the entire beauty is vanished. Not only thinking our entire behavior depends on our happiness and sadness. A lovely write.

Yes Valsa doldrums and lost love can go hand in hand. When you lose someone it does throw you into a slump. Hopefully will look up and see the rainbow once again! Enjoyed.

Both your twin triplets are enchanting with depth of meaning which is very captivating. With regards, Chandra Thiagarajan

Both your twin triplets are each enchanting with depth of meaning.Fabulous, Valsa.

Short simple and touching feel sad but enjoyed reading as the poetess enjoyed writing.

enjoyed reading it, , , ,

The great debut of love to life Once I saw rainbows in the sky Once I caught the melody in the wind Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears

Once I saw rainbows in the sky Once I caught the melody in the wind I like thsese two lines, , , , very beautiful! ! ! Top marksss! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

wow pure melancholy that takes minds away to a lonsome haven adorns only by wrekage ship after a devistating storm.... in few words you gracefully embebed all the melody of lost love.... inspired penning...