Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Twin Triplets. No.19. Life, Death Comments

Rating: 4.6

LIFE

Precious and priceless
But gradually weakens and withers
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2018

Life is Precious and priceless but it opens the door of the death, so also death is unpredictable but opens the door of the life. A wonderful creation in your hand dear madam, many thanks for sharing these Twin Triplets.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2016

Unpredictable! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2014

Life or death, both are mysteries, but I am afraid of life not of death.

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Savita Tyagi 19 April 2014

Very nice. Few words say it all.

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

Intricately enmeshed and interconnected. Nice write. Succinct and wise.

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Kavya . 01 April 2014

wow....so true and so nicely put in three lines! it says all!

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Md Asadullah 30 March 2014

Life of this world is temporal life, the real life is the life of the hereafter inbetween them is death, Poem is small but the message is big, thankyou :) 10/10

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V P Mahur 29 March 2014

Dear Madam, I would just say WAO Amazing words like ancient Indian Poet Bihari Lal Who filled 'saagar in the gaagar' and thanks fooooor your nice comments. your joke is so tickling, like an affectionate sparkling. Thanks a lot!

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Muhammad Ali 28 March 2014

Beautiful poem. I want to say that it is the last line in the poem which make it an extraordinary for me. Best wishes.

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Dinesan Madathil 28 March 2014

'Death eventually opening the door to life! ....... beyond that door what is there to speak of is the concern. A streak of optimism about the ultimate exit and that of pessimism about life are however, powerfully driven home in these twin triplets. A fine write madam.

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Gajanan Mishra 27 March 2014

life, death very fine, we are within.10

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Patricia Grantham 27 March 2014

In order for a seed to germinate it has to be planted in the earth. The seed dies and opens up to a new life of beauty. Passed from death unto life. Very good.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 March 2014

The full circle of life drawn so perfectly here! 'At once disconnecting and conjoining And opens the door to life' - A glittering jewel in the crown. These two lines kept me thinking for a while, as to how death opens the door to life, albeit life in the eternity. Thanks for sharing such diamond pieces.10/10.

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Dave Walker 27 March 2014

A great poem and the truth, if we have life then we have to have death.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 26 March 2014

Life and death, the truth so elegantly crafted........Valsa.....succinct yet profound..........truly classic

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 26 March 2014

wisdom concised marvelously!

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Nika Mcguin 26 March 2014

Life & Death, the twin revolving doors of fate(aka the circle of life?) ! A fascinating write and all together true! You've made such complex topics compact, yet dense with frightening wonder. ~Nika

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