LIFE
Precious and priceless
But gradually weakens and withers
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Life or death, both are mysteries, but I am afraid of life not of death.
3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true
3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true
Intricately enmeshed and interconnected. Nice write. Succinct and wise.
Life of this world is temporal life, the real life is the life of the hereafter inbetween them is death, Poem is small but the message is big, thankyou :) 10/10
Dear Madam, I would just say WAO Amazing words like ancient Indian Poet Bihari Lal Who filled 'saagar in the gaagar' and thanks fooooor your nice comments. your joke is so tickling, like an affectionate sparkling. Thanks a lot!
Beautiful poem. I want to say that it is the last line in the poem which make it an extraordinary for me. Best wishes.
'Death eventually opening the door to life! ....... beyond that door what is there to speak of is the concern. A streak of optimism about the ultimate exit and that of pessimism about life are however, powerfully driven home in these twin triplets. A fine write madam.
In order for a seed to germinate it has to be planted in the earth. The seed dies and opens up to a new life of beauty. Passed from death unto life. Very good.
The full circle of life drawn so perfectly here! 'At once disconnecting and conjoining And opens the door to life' - A glittering jewel in the crown. These two lines kept me thinking for a while, as to how death opens the door to life, albeit life in the eternity. Thanks for sharing such diamond pieces.10/10.
A great poem and the truth, if we have life then we have to have death.
Life and death, the truth so elegantly crafted........Valsa.....succinct yet profound..........truly classic
Life & Death, the twin revolving doors of fate(aka the circle of life?) ! A fascinating write and all together true! You've made such complex topics compact, yet dense with frightening wonder. ~Nika
Life is Precious and priceless but it opens the door of the death, so also death is unpredictable but opens the door of the life. A wonderful creation in your hand dear madam, many thanks for sharing these Twin Triplets.