Twin Triplets. No.18. Fidelty, Betrayal Comments

Both the poems are touching. Like the base of a triangle, joined with a line and meeting each other at the vertex, after traveling on their sides. How old pet is treated and how the old mothers and grandmothers are treated. How the master forgot this dying pet was once a device of joy. How the children forgot that this is the woman who gave birth to them, who fed them to grow. Well we are helpless, this life is not designed by us, still it's for us.

Life sap drained! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Beautiful triplets. So sad but it is the fact. Powerful write.

The first one made me cry.The second made me angry.Great poetry makes you feel lots of different emotions.Well done

So moving and heartfelt. Sad but often true.

Poignant write. Beautiful triplets.

both robust...and impacting!

Time and again man fails to understand the need for compassion and empathy built on human values. A dog has been wagging its tail since its origin on the earth and befriending the man. A mother has ever been toiling for her children too since her entity began. Life is a tale told by an opportunistic man and his actions. It is a moving triplet by you Madam Valsa..

Two very sad truths.....

a good poem to read................................

Touching topics and moving words.

very fine and touching, thanks.