Saturday, March 10, 2018

Twin Grazing Comments

Rating: 5.0

One of this grazing is similar to another,
All plants beside have given their bless,
Bullocks are busy in spite of busy dusk,
Under the highway beauty has attracted.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 November 2018

A beautiful nature write that dazzles the heart. A wonderful thought on friendship. Well penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 August 2018

A great title and theme. Amazing nature write. Very well crafted..Like the picture attached to the poem.10++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2018

Promise of nice friendship! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 March 2018

Both cattle were grazing together with an unconcern, peacefully that was truly beautiful to see.........Kumarmaniji......and so beautifully scripted........thanks for sharing........10

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Muzahidul Reza 18 March 2018

Grazing has brought disappearance of grass, Brass of moment is seen merged with joy. fantastically penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Mj Lemon 18 March 2018

Peace and tranquility....those came to mind immediately. Then as I reread, the focus was taken up by harmony and calm. Such a soothing and calming verse, Kumarmani. A great poem.

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even iron gets rust 15 March 2018

No tiredness, no worries and no tension are seen, Let dusk move in dreamland of real highway, This is twin grazing that has empowered life....captured the nature in real frame..10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 March 2018

Twin grazing with necks bent down, kissing the earth. Beautifully caught in the picture and captured in the poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

An excellent poem! The art of love and friendship is beautifully depicted in this brilliant poem! The photo compels us to think what love and emotion is all about! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Rebecca Navarre 11 March 2018

Beautifully Shared! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Sown! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Perdita Young 10 March 2018

Such a beautiful landscape depicted by your poem...very musical also. A joy to read it.10++++++

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 March 2018

A lovely pastoral poem with wonderful poetic depiction and wise words. Such a poem brings serenity and tranquil disposition.

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Beautiful poem so well crafted Exellent writing 10+ Kumarmani Mario Odekerken

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 March 2018

Peaceful coexistence of nature. A wonderful poem filled with lovely imagery.10

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Sandra Feldman 10 March 2018

Dear Poet, You have so beautifully tied life giving nature to all living things: 'Twins grazing that has empowered life' Wonderful poem of Life's renaissance. May the birth on this earth never stop! 'Even time surrenders before unity to identify' One cannot help but be mesmerized and enchanted by this beautiful ode to life, birth, peace and beauty so carefully and unforgettably woven by excellent poetry.

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sandra feldman 10 March 2018

Dear Poet, You have so beautifully tied life to giving Nature, to all living things: Twins grazing that has empowered life. Wonderful poem of. life's Renaissance. May the births of this earth never stop. One cannot help but be mesmerized by the beauty and peaceful serenity of this work. Excellent poem to read and be remembered as very exceptional.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2018

That's the message of friendship and coexistence, Mahakul Ji read The message, I wish the whole humanity might read this message. Great poem, loved it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 March 2018

Kumarmani, such a wonderful poem....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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