Tuesday, April 30, 2019

Twin Emotions Comments

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Hope and despair,
Smile and tear
Appear in our lives
Like a twin pair.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Bri Edwards 20 August 2022

'These emotions lie not afar From either, of one another.' I think I'd say: 'These emotions lie not far, one from the other.'

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2020

@Edward Kofi Louis, Thanks for the short comment. Best wishes....

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2020

@sekharan Pookkat, Thanks to you too, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here. Much inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2020

@Aniruddha Pathak, Thank you so much for your kind, inspiring words and the generous praise! Shall look forward to your visit to my page many times more, welcome!

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2020

@Malabika Ray Choudhury, 'I will slowly read your other poems' - hope you have ead at least a few, in the mean time. 'Staying abroad, I am writing more in English, but Bengali is always close to my heart' - that's natural, the vernacular comes first! Thanks for your reading and comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2020

@Aniruddha Pathak, Well said by you too - 'the opposites are not apart but part of the same continuum! Thanks for sharing your wisdom, dear poet.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2020

@Mahtab Bangalee, Thanks for reading the poem and for the comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Rajnish Manga, Thank you for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts here. Glad to have your comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2020

Emotions of love and life! ! ! Mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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sekharan Pookkat 16 May 2019

Tag and tug Hope and despair Smile and tear together with contentment and determination- thanks for sharing such a wonderful theme

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 May 2019

Very well said, a poem well-crafted- becoming a rarity these days. And yes, a twain that reinforces each other.

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Loved your poem - an important message of wisdom in a few lines! I will slowly read your other poems. I would love to have your feedback about my Bengali poems. Staying abroad, I am writing more in English, but Bengali is always close to my heart. Especially I would appreciate if you have a chance to look at my translations from Tagore. Thank you.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 May 2019

Well said, the opposites are not apart but part of the same continuum. Day and night both together make a complete day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 May 2019

exactly happy and sorrow twin emotions are not far from each other because by born both are a twin from one womb!

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Rajnish Manga 30 April 2019

Lovely poem based on the reality of life.

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