Twin Cinquains - Snake/Fish Comments

I like turtles

Both cinquains are interesting and meaningful. Well penned. Thanks for sharing.

I am now introduced to cinquains- I will try my cinquain after enjoying first and studying later, your cinquains. it looks as though you are telling 'meet Mr.Snake' 'meet Mr.Fish! '. Thanks for sharing.

I like the contrast betwen the two. A great poem.

Brilliant Cinquains on Snake and Fish . Enjoyed, Valsa!

I see Dinesh Nairs's point. I think deep waters are CALM. Depth may feel dreary to us but for fish it's their natural environment. Beautifully rendered poem.

A good write I am not so skilled at this type of poem, great job.

both cinquains are well thought out and written enjoyed

Your Cinquain on the snake is realistic. But you say about the fish living in the waters deep and dreary. It is not perhaps so.... I have read somewhere that fish lives a better life in spite of the threat to life from its bigger peers. They live an adventurous life that cannot be dreary like that of a snake.

Classy poem..Loved reading it...Good write..