Saturday, July 24, 2010

Twilight Visions (Sitigotyo) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gardens make me ecstatic-a green paradise,
I picture how it will be a sight in sunrise
A joy of carefree bushes relates to my heart;
Sorrow of separation from me shall depart.
...
Read full text

Ajay Seshadri
COMMENTS

Loved the metaphor! Garden, love..and the encompassing of nature and creation. Enjoyable read! ; D

0 0 Reply
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 July 2010

Hmm Garden-Fresh…like a Soul Freshener…well metaphorized…entwined in 'You' and 'Garden'…symbolism...well conceptualized……thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

0 0 Reply
Ajay Seshadri

Ajay Seshadri

Chennai
Close
Error Success