Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Twilight (Triolet) Comments

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Our youth has now faded with winged feet
And age has lined our weary face with sighs
The mirror does not lie nor does it cheat
Our youth has now faded with winged feet
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David Wood
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M Asim Nehal 18 September 2015

Superb poem, as we grow old....age has lined our weary face with sighs

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2015

Age has lined our weary face! With the muse of life and growth. Nice work.

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Gajanan Mishra 17 September 2015

really great- age has lined our weary face with sighs..

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Sanjukta Nag 17 September 2015

Great poem and the significance of the title is amazing. thank you.

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