Twilight Thoughts Comments

Another nice rythmic poem. I have read three poems so far today today and they all share similarities in the way they are talking about women. Very refreshing. Thanks H Gyp's

a very good poem about the scary years in which the grim reaper becomes quite excited about the prospect of a new addition to the family because the light does become brighter in the tunnel regardless of what people tell about things getting better, i think your needs become less and you bcome excited when you actually get what you want warm regards AJS

goood concept though you should sit down to do a bit of touchup.