Saturday, September 19, 2009

Twilight Steps Comments

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Crimson streaks across a pale blue sky
The sun melts over the horizon slowly
Dripping its last rays over our skin
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Fiona Davidson
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Sue Sie 19 September 2009

Steps taken to reach the twilight..disappear into the sunset...lovely imagery in this one...I walked it... ;) ... Sue

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Catrina Heart 19 September 2009

Fabulous poetry with wonderful picturesque of nature's view............10++++++++

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Fay Slimm 19 September 2009

Just lovely Fi.... a perfect picture painted of the sunset and twilight - thank you - - 10 + ++ Fay

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