Twilight Sky Comments

You convey the feeling of pain so eloquently, the same feeling which echoes in my heart. The last line is so moving.

A candlelight piece in twilight, distrust in never land a sad tale by an expert story teller...very appealing write I can feel it+++++10 regards

indeed very touching.. you write with an effect.. the words create a brilliant picture.. regards prashant

the unreachable star...glitters in sky to be adored...a metaphor in poetic cogitations...a brilliant piece written....10

This lady is a genius! ! Excellent poetic line A fine piece to ponder on..... When you publish your book Please give me one..... Keep it up C.T...

A feeling unbearable reveals itself in verse touching the readers!

glittering like the stars in the sky... glistening under the smoke of the star studded night you write with great impact..... sad but still it glistened with beauty touching.....really touching.... my friend, you have that silent river touch...(smile) 10+++ Lovelots, Maia