Monday, June 20, 2016

Twilight (Haiku) Comments

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with luscious red lips
she kisses the setting sun~~
goodbye till morrow
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Spock The Vegan 01 July 2016

Great imagination. Thanks

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thanks for your kind words.

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Ludolf Dauphin 29 June 2016

Great Haiku..enjoy reading it...

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than you Ludolf, much appreciated!

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Guru Kothandaraman 20 June 2016

Great imagination. Loved the imagery portrayed here.

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Gil Highlander 20 June 2016

Well done Govind, Kelly is right, the sun blushes.

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2016

And the sun blushes. Excellent Haiku, Govind

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means a lot coming from my favorite poet

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Stephen Park 20 June 2016

great red ball of fire, going down for the evening..... perfect 10!

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