Twilight, Early Spring Comments

This is a very romantic poem and a well told story. The passion and desire is rippling off my computer screen. These lines say it all: Why do moon and trees, air and heat, darkness and fading light all acknowledge me, and yet she is silent, self-absorbed, distant even in nearness? We are sharing this silence. We are of one mind. It should be a shared spring.

hey, daniel! part 1 of your poem made me think of an issa poem. while paging for it, though, i came on this one also apropos— The spring day lingers in the pools. then i came on this one— Blossoms at night, and the faces of the people moved by music. glen

Spring is love - - - Spring is felt without one being aware of its presence.- - - -Love too is felt without being expressed overtly- - - - - The man and the woman in this poem feel their mutual attraction for each other- - - Nature creates the perfect ambience for love.

Straight to my favourite poems.....

One of the best poems I have read in the recent past, the imageries are flawless, metaphors are perfect and the way you have described the beauty of the girls comparing it with the nature, night and silence are amusing. Nature is full on in your poem and as I read my imagination scaled the heights of the Himalaya and touched the floating clouds. Articulate poem, though beyond rating yet 100++++++