(I)
She sits very still
in a grassy plot that will
soon be night, crossed with shadows,
pierced by shafts of piercing moonlight,
in the shallow darkness of early spring.
I am standing a short distance from her
in a grove of trees with pale green leaves.
There is no breeze. Every leaf is still,
even my breathing is slow and soundless.
Her twilight complexion is more beautiful
than twilight itself."Turn toward me, "
I plead. "See me, greet me." To no avail.
I walk tentatively behind her, and enter
the edge of her grassy plot. Suddenly
I feel like an interloper, and leave quickly.
As I turn away, as I walk away,
her presence weighs on me. I feel motionless
air on my arms and face, I see traces of moonlight
on my clothes, even the silence touches me.
But that girl of spring touches me most deeply.
Why do moon and trees, air and heat, darkness
and fading light all acknowledge me, and yet
she is silent, self-absorbed, distant even
in nearness? We are sharing this silence.
We are of one mind. It should be a shared spring.
(II)
The air is moist with desire.
We are just beginning to become
"Spring People." The heaviness of winter
still holds many people in its cold grip.
"Look at the sky! " I want to shout at them.
The warmth washes over me with its pure air.
I am cleansed by it, I shine because it
covers me with illumination. This is as
close to the Garden as we can be, and
it is a wonder to be shared with someone dear.
Who is that guy who's been eyeing me
for two hours? He approaches me timidly,
then withdraws boldly. I hope he reverses
his actions. He is obviously a man of Nature
and Desire. Come over here. Speak to me.
hey, daniel! part 1 of your poem made me think of an issa poem. while paging for it, though, i came on this one also apropos— The spring day lingers in the pools. then i came on this one— Blossoms at night, and the faces of the people moved by music. glen
Spring is love - - - Spring is felt without one being aware of its presence.- - - -Love too is felt without being expressed overtly- - - - - The man and the woman in this poem feel their mutual attraction for each other- - - Nature creates the perfect ambience for love.
One of the best poems I have read in the recent past, the imageries are flawless, metaphors are perfect and the way you have described the beauty of the girls comparing it with the nature, night and silence are amusing. Nature is full on in your poem and as I read my imagination scaled the heights of the Himalaya and touched the floating clouds. Articulate poem, though beyond rating yet 100++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very romantic poem and a well told story. The passion and desire is rippling off my computer screen. These lines say it all: Why do moon and trees, air and heat, darkness and fading light all acknowledge me, and yet she is silent, self-absorbed, distant even in nearness? We are sharing this silence. We are of one mind. It should be a shared spring.