Twilight Comments

Simply beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

There is something of the setting of the sun which seems to make us hold our breath until it submerges..being surrounded with haunting tones of music only increases the sense of a large cathedral in which we open to all existence..lovely word picture here.

that smooth transition which normally goes unnoticed, thnq sandra...

As our sun slowly sinks, to rise upon a different world, our days troubles melt away, a peace that settles down comes over us as twilight turns to night. A lovely time of day. A lovely poem 10+

just as we embrace the day, we should also embrace the night for what it gives us... peace, rest, a time to reflect....and this is what your poem does...

Sound and color combine to soothe the mind of the reader. A contemporary picture of twilight that is very memorable. Excellent. As always, Sandra

You painted a beautiful picture of seashore at dusk with the paintbrush of words........thanks for sharing...........a good write........

very beautiful Sandra. you have brought alive in words the magic woven by sand, seashore, waves and stars at twilight, and in the background a soulful song. what more could a weary person want to destress.I am truly enchanted with the easy flow of the poem 10++ please read After the sunset, whenever you get time. Mamta

very beautiful imagery... so peaceful a very clear picture as it changes form twilight to night really beautiful image... the words are wonderfully chosen to form this meaningful and so beautiful piece... a beautiful painting... 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia

beautiful imagery and I can sense the peace in twilight moment with your nice write....lovely indeed....10

As the sun flees to sink into the edge of the earth, for the day to become the peaceful night, the musician plays a soothing tune to the minds of listeners. Beautiful, serene poem.

The expressiveness of this fine poem was quite exceptional, Sandra, and your imagery in it was superb as well. You painted a vivid and unforgettable scene with your well chosen words in this lovely poem. Carl.

Sandra, you capture the moment as you touch the horizon of poetry. A very lovely work. :)

Beautiful writing Sandra. The image of the fireball is superb and the flute's music combined with the sound of the waves and the colors is simply wonderful. 10 love Karin

Lovely poem Sandra. You could very well capture that scene and take us there for few moments. Sometimes your style very much resembles that of Mamta Agarwal, who is a great descriptive poet.

A lovely picturisation. A wonderful scene; peaceful, soothing music taking us away from our worries to a far away land (Promised Land) . Gave me the feeling of watching a movie, a very pleasant one...........Display of Great Talent!

I went there.. on the wings of your words.. i went there.

Dreamy scene Sandra - - so peaceful I feel I was there hearing that flute.... lovely - - 10 + ++ Fay

LOVELY SANDRA..YOU CAPTURE THE MOMENT WELL AS LIKE THE ONE PLAYING THE FLUTE...PEACE AND QUIET MUSIC FLOWS IN THIS SOFT POEM

a poem that gives me a peaceful feeling 10