A subdued silence,
stretched over the corners of the universe.
A silent cry,
of some uninitiated imagination…
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beautiful observation of the sun going out and moon risingto greet a night sky.very well painted in the poem.very good write sarvesh.
you write wonderfully.i enjoyed your vision of the twilight immencely.10+
the light before dawn too is twilight, sarvesh...the poem reads full of pathos, , , brighten it up considering dawn too...u'll one day end up a great poet!
your view of a subdued silence........till end are well crafted.........twilight is really illuminate in the poem hunter..........
wowwwwwwwwwwww ageless woman to give birth, to another death for yet another creation such lovely words and thoughts superb -10 anjali
and give birth, to another death, for yet another creation… Rachel Ann Butler