Monday, May 11, 2009

...Twilight. Comments

Rating: 4.8

A subdued silence,
stretched over the corners of the universe.
A silent cry,
of some uninitiated imagination…
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

and give birth, to another death, for yet another creation… Rachel Ann Butler

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Ritty Patnaik 18 July 2009

beautiful observation of the sun going out and moon risingto greet a night sky.very well painted in the poem.very good write sarvesh.

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Maitreyee Joshi 24 May 2009

you write wonderfully.i enjoyed your vision of the twilight immencely.10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Another nice composition, love it with 10.

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Indira Babbellapati 12 May 2009

the light before dawn too is twilight, sarvesh...the poem reads full of pathos, , , brighten it up considering dawn too...u'll one day end up a great poet!

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Ency Bearis 12 May 2009

wonderful write..a significant poem well presented...nice...10

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rago rago 11 May 2009

your view of a subdued silence........till end are well crafted.........twilight is really illuminate in the poem hunter..........

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

wowwwwwwwwwwww ageless woman to give birth, to another death for yet another creation such lovely words and thoughts superb -10 anjali

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